Awash in Sentiment and in Love with Loveliness

photos + textAbsolutes

Marvel with me, if you will,

that water never flows uphill,

that whiners know no dulcet tone,

and ants leave nary a cake alone;

that day follows night and night the day,

that parrots always have something to say,

that money’s scarce in holiday season,

and you love me still, despite all reason.

digital collageNaturally, I Thought of You

I stepped onto the broad parterre to make a painting en plein air,

but found, instead of gentle breeze, the air was cold enough to freeze;

instead of fresh and sunny scenes, a garden growing wilted greens;

I’d hoped to capture nature’s glory–saw, instead, an allegory

teaching me: the garden pales, the skies grow dim, and nature fails

and seems all doomed to soon be dead–so I just painted you instead,

and in your portrait, found that kind of natural joy I’d hoped to find.

25 thoughts on “Awash in Sentiment and in Love with Loveliness

  1. Both of the oeams are lovely, Kathryn, and touch cords deep within. πŸ™‚ I wonder where the wind is hurrying to? It always seems to be in a rush to get there, for whenever I perceive the wind, it is always on the move.

      • Ted, I’m so glad you like the poems; by “both”, I presume you mean the ones in the body of the post–but I’ll bet you wouldn’t mind the one in the photo either! πŸ˜‰

        Yes, wind is a tricky customer and never fails to surprise me; when it comes, when it *doesn’t* come though expected . . . . It has an impressive impact on my mood and attitude for something only visible via its impact on solids. Hmmm.

  2. I love that you can so easily change the tone of your poems. They seem effortlessly written.. is this so or do you draft and draft? You really have a natural talent and gift for words.. and you know words I’ve never heard of, I love that about you! Cheers, Barb

    • Thank you, dearest. I’m not often very ‘drafty’ in *that* way, just long-winded! I do tweak poems once or twice to even out a pattern, eliminate some of the junk, clarify or that sort of thing, but I’m far too impatient to fuss over anything that doesn’t come pretty close to what I wanted on first try. That’s even true with essays, posts and longer writings. So I guess I’d say with my short attention span and unwillingness to labor too hard without visible results, I’m mostly a fast-and-loose writer.

      I suspect you’re more deliberate, if only because your words always come across as not only well chosen and fitting but also get laid out very prettily on the page to enhance the whole of the presentation. That doesn’t just *happen*, I would think!

    • While the bottom image (accidentally doubled-up, whether by me or by WordPress I don’t know) is obviously a digital composite, the top pair of photos are unretouched and from a park you ought to see. Really lush! Those shots weren’t even taken during the peak of the season. It’s a rhododendron park, but has a number of “side interest” specialties like candelabra primroses, ferns, alpine rock plants, bonsai and others that each are featured in different zones. Maybe I should try to share a little list of favorite fabulous gardens I’ve seen . . . .

      Meanwhile, I know what you mean: it’s so nice to have a ‘breather’ from whatever’s the current season’s focus with a little reminder that there’s something else ahead.

    • Lindy Lee, you are so generous! Thank you for the encouragement. I’m afraid I’m a very ignorant, sloppy technician in verse and if there’s any meter or form whatsoever it’s nearly always coincidental, so I’m happy if I happen to fall *near* any mark! πŸ˜‰

  3. Read them all through a number of times, what to say? It’s funny I often will read good poetry and enjoy it but have difficulty in picking something out to comment on, I just enjoy the whole package I guess. πŸ™‚

    • I know just how you feel, Dennis. I’m delighted if you enjoy!!

      *My* reason for not remarking on specifics in others’ work, however, is that I have nearly zero technical knowledge about poetry, so I can’t comment on historical precedents, form and pattern and meter and all of that wonderful stuff, with any sort of intelligence, so I just have to go with my visceral response. So I’m pleased enough if others are no more specific than having gotten a kick out of reading my stuff! πŸ™‚

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