Improvisations in the gold-lit nave, where I sat as of old,
Among the candle flames and greens, the paraments and carven screens
And incense-laden night, these scenes of ceremony were the means
Offsetting those surprising, bold improvisations that you told
The sanctuary’s lofty lair, and all of us who huddled there
So mesmerized by new-made tunes, to which our souls were not immune,
Since you were writing down the runes
–as you have done these many moons–
You marked this newness down with care, though improvised out of the air;
I bent to listen to the way that old pipe-organ seemed to say
Something, in whispers, of a time–long past, I thought–in which sublime
Rhythms and patterns like your chiming play of Tierce en Taille, were, I’m
Quite sure, shaped as a different lay, wherein another love did play,
A love now gone to other stations of the Cross than these relations,
Playing something sweet and deep across the borderlands of sleep,
Across your grand recital; sweeping through the memories I keep:
Those evening organ-conflagrations, candlelit improvisations.


I like the POV in the top shot π
Thanks, Eden. It was mainly decided *for* me by where I could fit in a small space in a darkish room with not much maneuvering to hover over the old harpsichord. Sometimes circumstances force a better POV than what I might have automatically chosen! (Okay, it probably *should* have been an organ manual for this poem, but I didn’t happen to have a good shot of one on hand.) π
You really do spoil us, you know.
Uh-oh, do I make you moldy and compost-like? π
Seriously, thank you. π
Loved it! Very melodic and rhymic, and I especially was caught up in that with the rhymes and alliteration in “So mesmerized….” and the lines immediately following that one.
I am so glad you approve, O Bard! I always appreciate your reading!
Ah, you have been in the cathedral again methinks!! c
Indeed I was. It was at one of the Lessons and Carols services in the last weeks, when the guest organist, the venerable Gerre Hancock, was playing a flurry of his renowned improvisations, that I was carried back some years to listening to a late beloved friend of R’s and mine who was a spectacular improvisateur but, sadly, only ours to keep until he was 40. It was grand to be reminded of him in the playing of an elder master, a little as though ‘perhaps this is what he’d have been like one day . . . ‘ A little bitter, but very sweet all the same. π
I loved this poem… and now love it even more knowing its’ story…
ChgoJohn is completely right… And how I do love that you spoil us all the way you do. Now, I simply must know this: What is in the swirls photos?!
Extremely-Photoshopped versions of twirly-swirls I photographed: (top L and bottom R) a carved tombstone scroll and (top R and bottom L) a piece of coiled brass plumbing pipe. You know, the obvious things. π
So very obvious! You are officially the Queen of all Things Artistic in my book!
I love it…I really enjoy reading it….I wish my english is good as yours….(english is my second language)
Dear Nors,
You have no idea how impressed I am with anyone mastering another language, especially one as “messy” and complicated as English–let alone writing so well in it as you do!! I have only the most rudimentary knowledge of any languages other than my native English (mostly, you won’t be surprised to hear, food words!) and am still working on the whole English thing as it is. π
This was beautiful! The music, the visuals…everything coming out of this poem just flew into my soul. I swear.
You’re full of inspiration, Kathryn. Makes me wish I can get know the world a bit better.
I hope you have *many* happy years ahead in which to get to know the world better! I’m glad we can work and play together along the way. π
What beautiful writing. I was encouraged by John to visit your blog and I’m very glad I did.
Thank you so much, HS. John has led me to a number of blogs I greatly enjoy too. I guess when he realizes how much influence he has he’s going to start charging us all a commission! π
What a beautiful poem. The music and the colors in the music and the words are really strong. It sings. But the meaning, keeping faith with the grand recital of love, faith, and life inside the cathedral, should not be lost inside all of the poem’s other virtues. Really nice work.
Thank you, kind friend. I appreciate your spending the time and thought to peel back layers and respond to them. Your very comments are poetically inspiring.
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