A Whisper in Your Ear, My Dear

graphite drawingFriendly Advice to a Feckless Youth

The true Reckless Endangerment

is seldom what you’d guess:

not often quite so obvious

as acting under stress,

thus putting others in harm’s way

for physical duress;

more likely, it’s just saying things

much better left unsaid

about your girlfriend’s hairstyle, or

about great-uncle Fred,

who is your mother’s richest

relative and, shortly, dead.

It’s bad enough your note on Fred

will cut Mom from his will,

and likely keep you from her own

good graces longer still,

but there’s your girlfriend left to calm.

Let’s hope the bitter pill

of your ill-thought hairstyle remark

won’t make her wish you ill.graphite drawingWhen Ladies are Dancing

Patterns of elegance, synchronized moves,

Footsteps as fluid as flowing in grooves

Down sides of a fountain afloat with champagne,

They leap and they glide and they dance the refrain

As though they were ageless and weightless as light,

Each gesture, each pattern, each detail so right,

So proper and grace-filled, expressive of joy—

Intimidate wholly the poor sidelined boy!

10 thoughts on “A Whisper in Your Ear, My Dear

  1. There is such brilliance in you dearest Kathryn! In thought, heart, word and image. I don’t mean to bore you with the same tedious praise time and again, but sometimes I just have to open my big yap and tell you what I sees! xoxo

  2. Enjoyed today’s offerings, Kathryn, but I so identify with the sidelined boy. It’s a wonder I ever felt a dance floor under my feet! And, as always, your artwork add so much to the post.

    • Ha! I can think of exactly two times I actually went out on a dance floor (for about one ‘dance’ each time, if you could call it that), and both times felt horrendously out of place. So I know that my place is strictly on the sidelines. But as long as people don’t take offense that I genuinely *prefer* it there, safely watching, I am very happy to watch others strut their stuff.

  3. You do, indeed, write with a fine KI unique style.
    Disinheriting & dancing, interesting subject combo. Somewhere in there is an analogy,
    a metaphor or simile but brain broils with trying to come up with one; getting late in the day for this brain…

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