One day in my car when I was a-glide
and watching the highway (mostly),
I stopped for a fellow who thumbed a ride
to go farther west, more coast-ly–
After all, the sun was high in the sky
and the temperature creeping northward,
so it seemed a mercy to take the guy
and deliver him farther forth-ward–
He was pleasant, and smiled, and tipped his hat,
but I’d hardly call him talkative,
which I took as caused by the reason that
in the heat he’d been too walk-ative–
So we rode along, Silent Sam and I,
toward the coast and the broad blue sea,
’til I blinked in the glare of the sun to spy
his hat lying next to me–
No sign of the smiling, silent bloke;
what a startled twitch I made!
My sunglasses flew right off and broke
as if put to shame by a shade–
Well, I got to the shore soon after that,
keeping watch on the highway (mostly),
and was glad for the shade of the shade’s broad hat,


Well done! I smiled and enjoyed. 🙂
Happy to help, Dennis! 🙂
What an enjoyable read. You have a very unique voice, you didn’t lose me once. 🙂
Thank you, Daniel, I’m looking forward to reading more of your work soon, too!
And an enjoyable ride it was. Another bedtime with a smile. Thanks for the lift, Kathryn!
Any time I can manage it, John!
Delightful take on the Phantom Hitchiker, Dearie!
The classics never get old–I hope!!! 😀
Oh! dear pearl of a girl, thanx for the whirl, taking me a-glide, along on your ride…
Thanks, dear friend–ride along to the end!
I enjoyed the poetry very much.
Very happy you enjoyed it! Thanks for coming by, my friend.
So much fun!
Oh, goody, it worked! 🙂